Talk:Urban Discharges to Areas of Special Biological Significance on Monterey Peninsula

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Changes by Tyb:

So far I have tried to improve the flow of the article with sentence re-organization and basic grammar. I also filled in the reference section and created links at the bottom of the page for further reader interest. Stakeholder websites were also built into the page to allow quick access to their web resources. I have trouble tracking down information on the economics of storm drain management. Future research should try to focus on getting city budgets and $ amounts for cost of treating storm discharge as well as re-directing flows.

I tired with little success to add an image to the text. Future work should add pictures/images of the sites as well as some of the outflows. Images of wildlife would also go a long way to improve the quality of the article.